Kia ora Ocean, I really like the way your writing has a beginning a middle and an end. I got the feeling Jackson and Zoey were scared. Your title made me want to read what you wrote. I suggest you add a sentence about what you were learning and what you found easy as well as what you found hard. Maria
Kia ora Ocean,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way your writing has a beginning a middle and an end. I got the feeling Jackson and Zoey were scared. Your title made me want to read what you wrote. I suggest you add a sentence about what you were learning and what you found easy as well as what you found hard.
Maria
Thank you Maria for the wonderful comment i will fix up my mistake thanks for pointing it out.
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